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In response to: "On Blood-donation" 1425 days old
by billy [Visitor]
Your work is marvelous!!
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In response to: "Sonnet: World Elders’ Day 2005" 1446 days old
by closer [Visitor]
Your website looks great. Did you do it yourself?
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In response to: "Sonnet: 9/11 Revisited" 1484 days old
by MeDiK [Visitor]
probably you right...
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In response to: "Sonnet: 9/11 Revisited" 1521 days old
by drjohnceles [Member]
I agree poetry doesn't always come out that good.
Anyway, I thank you for your advice.
I must have written well over a thousand sonnets in the web already!
I don't think it is always possible to make every piece equally good. more…
In response to: "Sonnet: 9/11 Revisited" 1522 days old
by [Visitor]
Look, this *isn't* poetry. It's a bunch of rather unoriginal and uninteresting images lassoed together by the odd line-end rhyme, to the end of trying to appear important. It doesn't work as a poem.
Look, think about your own gut feelings towards what happened in New York four years ago, think about what things feel and look like subse more…
In response to: "Sonnet: Marriage" 1541 days old
by [Visitor]
well, who are you? show your face more…
In response to: "Terrorist Strikes!" 1577 days old
by drjohnceles [Member]
thank you Dawn for enjoying the read.
regards,
Dr John Celes more…
In response to: "Terrorist Strikes!" 1583 days old
by deleted user [Visitor]
I have enjoyed reading this poem, which says it all about death and destruction.
Regards
Dawn more…
In response to: "And Still People Smoke!" 1584 days old
by ianrthorpe [Member]
I think everybody has got the message that smoking does not do us any good but labouring the point can be counter productive.
A Doctor once told me I would have a heart attack or stroke if I did not stop smoking, cut down on fat and lose weight. He got very annoyed when I told him I could not possibly give up smoking (how could I have given u more…
In response to: "A Deaf-Mute" 1642 days old
by Bogie [Visitor]
Though I usually write lyrics, my work is not near as sophisticated as yours is. I read most of your poems but this one just touched me. I can't tell you how it has made me feel. I am insanely jealous of your writing and wish I could have written this particular poem. It's beautiful, it really is. I don't know what else to say so I am going to stop more…
In response to: "And Still People Smoke!" 1645 days old
by cathead [Member]
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In response to: "And Still People Smoke!" 1645 days old
by cathead [Member]
Sugar's abit of an unspoken devil, mainly due to the huge cover-up by the food industry.
For the facts on this mass poisoning project by Tate & Lyle visit the above site and navigate to " A DENTISTS NIGHTMARE"
Cheers
MSM more…